LegolasFIN's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[A big tutorial v1.0c]

Well

If u ran out of space make ''NEXT'' button! it was pretty weird!

[jazzy jones]

Ok man listen

Make this better:
1. In pre-Loader take that white line off in right
2. In the information put next button and in action script stop!
3. Draw better
4. It goes too fast too hard to get thro this make about 4 second time to press the button
5. Watch it ur self in flash press Ctrl Enter or Test movie!
6. In backround im sure u wanted blue -> purple -> blue -> purple and so on so u need to do same than with making it purple just make another motion tween changing BACK to blue! It getting anoying that backround
7. I see its ur first thats good job for first game!!
8. Realy i menthed that 7 cos if u see my first u will laught it was guy whinking his eye!
9.Good luck for future u have talent!

4/5
1/10

[Roadie Runner]

Nice

This is not the first and not the last game where u need to get over the road! the instrument stuff is good idea but when move out infront of car and u are on other way u die cos car behind u rides on u... its annoying even u move u die cant take any risks in this game!

[Nicholas' Weird Adventure]

Well

It is kinda strange joke... he couldent walk up and made big adventure... make drawings better also they are squares make lines so it will be better

4/5
7/10

[Koolmoves Tutorial(3of3)]

Well

Its kinda strange cos its tutorial whats gay whats not isnt that pretty strange?? u should make that if u press on text or some button all text comes at once its boring to wait until all text comes!

tTLight-SephirothTt responds:

hmmm...

[Flash Point]

Great

Great game nice one just the asking is when comes Fail or Pass how to get thro it cos the game stucks in it then...

[Beer Attack]

Funny

It is funny just make 1 thing better : When serve costumer ''close'' them cos if u press many times space at costumer he stucks and u can give hime million beer and get million $ Fix that but i give u now 3 when fix i give 5 :D

[Astro Bomber]

Not bad

Well gave 5 cos know is Protected but listen this advises:

Graphics 5 cos it was OK drawer but u could do better than that!
Style 6 cos game isnt that good hard to underestand the mission and what to do in it
Sound 6 took from last review cos sounds not working on my computer :D
Violense 4 Well nothing to explain if see blood its already some kinda violense :D
Interactivity 3 cos didnt underestand what game about
Humor 6 cos it was fun to play
Overall 4 cos game is OK

U should do those stuff better and u an get alot of 10!

shadowford responds:

Thanks for your review. Just look out for astro bomber 2 and then compare the two games

[Effects tutorial]

Nice

But thats pretty newb stuff for Flash Makers :D i trained that stuff long time ago

PS. if u press in sunset enought many times back u get to all beginning! plz make that boogie betetr i give u 3/5

[Alphattack]

So...

...Great game just 1 question HOW TO BEGIN PLAY?? I pressed PLAY but then comes that password thing and hint and tips and it kinda stuck in it i wated 30 secodbn and closed it! how to begin play!